Mei 11, 2016

Reporting Survey (Revision)

 SPORT HABITS

            Introduction
The project presented here, the survey of sport habits, involved of the student colleges. The survey aimed to know the sport habits that usually done by a person, especially the student colleges.

Method
The research was done by given an online questionnaire selected at random to the student colleges. Thirty four students were questioned on Thursday 5th May 2016.


Diagram 1.1 How often do you do sport in a week?

                       
Diagram 1.2 When do you usually do sport?



Diagram 1.3 What type of sport you often do?


Diagram 1.4 Do you think the sport has benefits?

Finding
From thirty four respondents, 82.4 % usually do the sport in 1-2 times in a week, 88.8 % they usually do sport in 3-4 times and over 4 times in a week. Especially the student colleges, most of them usually do the sport in 1-2 times in a week because they used a lot of time in the campus to lecturer, to do the task, or to do something in their student’s organization. So, they just have 1-2 times (in their free time) to do sport.

55.9 per cent the respondent usually do sport in the morning, 38.2 per cent they usually do sport in the afternoon. (the rest is done in the day and in the evening). So, most of them used time in the morning for do the sport. Mostly, that time usually used by a person to do sport, one of the reasons is the air. They can get the fresh air in the morning.

When we were asked about the type that usually do by them, from thirty four respondents, most of them do jogging (29.4 %). We know that jogging is one of sport that is easy to do, both for teens or adults. Especially for student colleges who live in the boarding house, they usually want to do easy exercise such as jogging.

All of respondent know that the sport have benefits, but some respondent who seldom do sport. Sport has many benefits, such as: helps control weight, help improve mood, prevent disease, increase energy, improve memory, and much more. Therefore, it is recommended to us, either teenagers or adults. Now let's start living healthy by to do sport at least 2 times a day.

Conclusion
Most of people do sport in 1-2 days per week. They usually do sport in the morning, one reason is they can get the fresh air in the morning, more relax. The type of sport that usually they do is jogging, because jogging is one sport that easy to do, moreover for student colleges. All of respondent know that the sport  has many benefit, such as helps control weight, prevent disease, increase energy, etc.





April 19, 2016

Letter of Invitation (Revision)

Here is my letter of invitation ^^


Peachy Hijab
Flamboyan Street CTX 34B
Yogyakarta

April, 17 2016

Dear Ms Devi Hermasari
We would hereby like to invite you to be a guest speaker at "Ladies in Hijab Conference and Grand Opening Our New Hijab Product", an event hosted by Natasha Farani and held at Royal Ambarukmo Plaza on May, 12 2016. 

We believe you would be a perfect person to be a guest speaker at this event because, You are our brand ambassador, and also We believe you have many experiences in the word of hijab and fashion. 

We hope you will take the time to consider this ofter. We will be contacting you later this week to discuss this idea in more detail. But if you have any question or concern, please do not hesitate to contack us. 

Thank You,

Hakiki Nirmala Sakti
Store Manager

April 12, 2016

Letter of Opinion (Revision)

My opinion letter is based on the news that I've read in Jakarta Post
(http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2016/04/05/batik-air-aborts-takeoff-following-collision.html)



Dear Editor,

Having read your article concerning “Batik Air aborts takeoff following collision” (Mon, April 4 2016 ), I am writing to express my opinion.

I think the human error occurred in the accident, so that is the omission of Air Traffic Control (ACT) officers. So, there must be done further investigation to the weak point and the mistakes. The wrong side in the accident should be given the sanctions that aircraft collision does not happen again and they should be more careful in their job.

According to the other sources, It is said that the movement of aircraft at Halim Perdana Kusuma Airport 108 times a day, outside the military flight or 54 takeoff and 54 landing.

During the time, some recommendation of KNKT are not carried out by the manager of Halim Perdana Kusuma airport. Among these, the issue of flight slot per hour, the capacity and the space for aircraft.

Currently, Halim Perdana Kusuma airport has only one aircraft movement path, that is west cross taxiway. That the plane does not need to turns to the takeoff and landing, need to built the new pathway for the movements of aircraft on the east side of the airport, that is the east cross taxiway.

Sincerely,

Hakiki Nirmala Sakti
Yogyakarta

April 05, 2016

Maret 29, 2016

Complain Letter (Revision)

I want to share about complain letter
From the exercise 9, I choose (c). The situation is: "Your child comes home from school with a note informing you that the school is closing at the end of the year because of falling numbers. All parents are asked to write and complain to the Department of Education, so you do so."

This is my letter... ^^

13 Avenue Street
Los Angeles, LA
February 26, 2012

Department of Education 
Stacey St,
Los Angeles, LA

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am one of parent whoes child is studying at school of  Bina Bangsa Senior High School.

I wish to complain about the closing of the school. Yesterday my daughter went back to home and she brought a note that inform the school is closing at the end of the year. It makes us as parents feel shocked. I do not know, why did this happen? Is it because the number of student? What about our children's education? We have paid for the education of our children. Will our children be expelled from the school.

I hope you can provide the best solution to this problem for our children's education.

I appreciate your attention.

Yours faithfully,


Sarah Ludwidge 

Maret 21, 2016

Letter of Inquiry (Revision)

Hi guys!


Hmmm. . . Today I want to share you about a letter of inquiry. What's the letter of inquiry?

I think inquiry letter is the letters that are written for collecting information about job seekers, prices, products, and services before awarding jobs, granting credit, making contracts and giving promotions are known as letters of inquiry. 



This is an example of inquiry letter that I made.

Nirmala Hijab
431 Blackmore Street
New York, NY 20011, USA
March 21, 2016

Hijab Queen
16 Avenue Street
Los Angeles, LA

Dear Madam,

I saw your advertisement in the “Hijab Hunt” a few days ago and interested in your hijab products.

Please let me have the details of your products, terms of payment and the price list. If the quality is satisfactory and the terms are reasonable, I will place a large order soon.

Could you give me the details of discount and the fastest delivery please?

I hope to receive your reply soon.


Sincerely,


Nirmala Sakti

Purchaser

Maret 09, 2016

Notes (Revision)

These are some examples of notes that I made in exercise 7, 9, and 10 on page 60-61.

Let's see!
Exercise 7 (b)
Exercise 9 (b)
Exercise 9 (d)
Exercise 10



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Februari 19, 2016

Formal Business Letter (Revision)

Graduate Research Centre
Stanfield Business School
Rochester
RC5 7JY
United Kingdom
Karelstraat 137
1051 Amsterdam
Netherlands

September, 17th 2016

Dear Mr Dave,

Respond to the confirmation of award

I am writing this letter to respond your letter to our team about confirmation of the award. Thank you for the opportunities, I am so glad to hear your information that my team is winner in this year. I hope my group and I could use it to improve our performance.

It is a great pleasure for me to know that my team is available to meet. Thank you for your invitation, I will come at 7th on October. Could I know what time I have to attend?

I am very thankful for your congratulation to my achievement in my project, and also all of the committee. and I hope, my group and I can continue to innovate and provide the best for all of them. 

Your sincerely,
Carl Laurent




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