Complain Letter (Revision)

I want to share about complain letter

From the exercise 9, I choose (c). The situation is: "Your child comes home from school with a note informing you that the school is closing at the end of the year because of falling numbers. All parents are asked to write and complain to the Department of Education, so you do so."

This is my letter... ^^

13 Avenue Street

Los Angeles, LA

February 26, 2012

Department of Education 

Stacey St,

Los Angeles, LA

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am one of parent whoes child is studying at school of  Bina Bangsa Senior High School.

I wish to complain about the closing of the school. Yesterday my daughter went back to home and she brought a note that inform the school is closing at the end of the year. It makes us as parents feel shocked. I do not know, why did this happen? Is it because the number of student? What about our children's education? We have paid for the education of our children. Will our children be expelled from the school.

I hope you can provide the best solution to this problem for our children's education.

I appreciate your attention.

Yours faithfully,

Sarah Ludwidge 

Letter of Inquiry (Revision)

Hi guys!

Hmmm. . . Today I want to share you about a letter of inquiry. What's the letter of inquiry?

I think inquiry letter is the letters that are written for collecting information about job seekers, prices, products, and services before awarding jobs, granting credit, making contracts and giving promotions are known as letters of inquiry. 

This is an example of inquiry letter that I made.

Nirmala Hijab

431 Blackmore Street

New York, NY 20011, USA

March 21, 2016

Hijab Queen

16 Avenue Street

Los Angeles, LA

Dear Madam,

I saw your advertisement in the “Hijab Hunt” a few days ago and interested in your hijab products.

Please let me have the details of your products, terms of payment and the price list. If the quality is satisfactory and the terms are reasonable, I will place a large order soon.

Could you give me the details of discount and the fastest delivery please?

I hope to receive your reply soon.

Sincerely,

Nirmala Sakti

Purchaser

Notes (Revision)

These are some examples of notes that I made in exercise 7, 9, and 10 on page 60-61.

Let's see!

Exercise 7 (b)

Exercise 9 (b)

Exercise 9 (d)

Exercise 10

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Formal Email (Revision)

This is an example of formal email. I hope it would be helpful for you :)